Cameron @ Elm Park School: My Memorable Meal

Tuesday 10 June 2014

My Reflection: This is my memorable meal. There is Drafts 1 and 2. The yellow is describing words, green are doing words and red is more words.

Unknown said...: Awesome, Cameron. Great work. From Grandma; 10 June 2014 at 15:57
Mrs Hodge said...: I like the way you have used adjectives to good effect. Crispy is particularly nice and it made me see, taste and feel that bacon!; 10 June 2014 at 21:24